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  • Prof McGuire 8:33 pm on May 16, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Grading Update

    Hi all. I trust everything is wrapping up well for you this semester. Just a quick update about this course. I am still in the midst of working through all your final work. I will be done with final assessments by midday Friday. At this point, you can visit the “Check My Grade” page one last time to see final comments and your final grade. This will remain online through the middle of next week. If you miss it, just send me an e-mail and I can let you know how things went.

    It’s been awesome, everyone,–a real pleasure. Thanks for a great semester.

     
  • Prof McGuire 3:57 pm on April 29, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Week 15: The Final Stretch to the Portfolio

    This is our final week before the portfolio is due. Lesson 15 materials are now available, and the focus is mostly on editing and proofreading strategies as you finish up your work. Detailed instructions on how to post your final portfolio are also included in this week’s material. Work hard. We’re just about there.

     
  • Prof McGuire 4:03 pm on April 24, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

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  • Prof McGuire 4:29 pm on April 22, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Lesson 14 material is available…

    I’ve posted the Lesson 14 materials on the Lessons Blog, so check it out. We’re nearing the end of things, so your portfolio pieces should be getting closer and closer to done. Be revising and making them strong while finishing your ethnographic “story of service” piece and writing the “beginning” and “end” as described in this week’s assignment.

    Next week, we talk about final editing, and I’ll give you the final instructions on assembling the portfolio. Almost there…

    Have a great week.

     
  • Prof McGuire 2:30 pm on April 22, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Something to Inspire

    This may seem just a bit random, but the more I think about it, the more relevant I think it is to the things we are trying to accomplish this semester (and beyond). I first learned of Ray Zahab when I saw the film Running the Sahara. I really like his message about pushing beyond perceived limits. Check it out, and let me know what you think.

     
    • Prof McGuire 8:38 pm on April 23, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      For the record everyone, the man in this video is not named “TED.” His name is Ray Zahab. The conference he is speaking at is called TED, which is an annual conference. (http://www.ted.com/pages/about). :-)

    • Maureen Rich 8:07 pm on April 23, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Although I could never do what TED did because like Patrycja, I do not like the cold nor would I want to be out in the desert that long either! His words were inspiring and I think it was great that he was trying to inspire children. I like how he said “make the impossible, possible”. He brought up a good point about being 13yrs old and hearing these words rather than learning it later on at 40. Overall, he is correct and anything is possible, as long as we put our minds to it and give it our all. It took a lot of strength and courage to do what TED and his friends did. I can’t even imagine the obstacles they came across the way, but they seemed to have thought it all out and traveled well prepared. Blogging it for children to learn from was a great idea to show children anything is possible.

    • Eric Wisch 1:56 am on April 23, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Eh, I don’t think he focused much on “believing in yourself” or “anything is possible”. In my opinion he is kind of a tool, his rant made me lose a little respect for TED.

      • Prof McGuire 8:35 pm on April 23, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

        Not sure why you say something like this–sounds kind of rude. You don’t have to agree with a person’s message, but to insult someone by name calling is faulty logic–called “ad hominem”–especially when their is no other substance to your criticism. Let’s at least keep it civil. Thanks.

    • Patrycja Gola 7:35 pm on April 22, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Ted did something I would never want to do, I hate the snow and the cold, it would freak me out to be in the middle of nowhere like that. 111 days of running in the Sahara desert does not sound appealing either, I have a hard time getting myself to jog around my block for 20 minutes so it’s great to see someone so motivated to do something like that, I wish I could find that within myself. I liked how he talked about getting inspired by someone else who is trying to solve the water issues that are going on in the world. 33 days in the snow and still being able to blog about it during the trip is an amazing accomplishment in itself. Butter and bacon does not seem appealing but like Ted said they were burning an average of 8,500 calories a day so butter and bacon seem like they would do them good. It was awesome that they did all this so they can inspire people, I don’t know if people will go out and do what they did but maybe people especially young people that are struggling to find their niche can go after something and do it, accomplish something that will benefit their futures and not live just for the present like most young people do. The part that really inspired me was when Ted said “I ran for the grand sum of five years, and a year before that I was a pack a day smoker living a very sedentary lifestyle.” I feel like this quote relates to so many people because of Americas battle with weight and diseases that are due to people’s lifestyles. There are so many people that struggle even getting in and out of a chair thinking that is what their future will be, thinking they will never lose weight, they will never live a “normal” life. Someone like Ted that sat around all day and lived an unhealthy lifestyle and then accomplishing something majority of people will never accomplish should be a huge motivation for so many people. I also liked how he stated “We can make the impossible possible”, that’s a great quote since anything we truly want to accomplish we will accomplish.

    • Linda Seguin 3:20 pm on April 22, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      We need more TED’S in this world. This is an exellent example of someone who witnesses a good deed to help mankind and pays it forward. He turned his world trekking into an educational adventure for all the children that he was blogging while tirelessly pushing forward to his goal.. Now that I am at a more mature point in my life, I am one of those people who could say that youth is wasted on the young If you are young think about TED’s advice and be motivated while your still in your prime youth to make a difference in the world. Don’t let it slip away. Be proactive like TED. I know that I still am on a much smaller scale.

  • Prof McGuire 7:41 pm on April 15, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Lesson 13 is now available…

    Lesson 13 materials are now posted to the Lessons Blog. Peer review, reading, and discussion this week…

     
  • Prof McGuire 3:29 pm on April 8, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Lesson 12 materials are now available…

    Lesson 12 material is now available on the Lessons Blog. Check it out and have a great week. (Be sure to be fully immersed in your fieldwork project at this point. A draft is due next week.)

     
  • Prof McGuire 2:28 pm on April 8, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Mayra Pulido would like your feedback…

    I know it’s late in the week, but Mayra would like you all to offer her some feedback on her work this week as part of our whole class workshop. If you can, please visit her page and drop her some thoughtful comments on her work. Thanks.

     
  • Prof McGuire 2:17 pm on April 8, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Grade Info Updated

    I have uploaded the latest grade info. Check it out, and let me know privately if anything looks amiss. Thanks.

     
  • Prof McGuire 8:06 am on April 5, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Please offer comments to Sarah

    Sarah Binger has volunteered her work for discussion in this week’s whole class workshop. Please offer her some comments. Thanks.

     
  • Prof McGuire 7:32 am on April 4, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Offer Patrycja Gola Comments Please

    Note that Patrycja Gola has volunteered her work for this week’s whole class workshop. Please offer her comments on her most recent piece. There is still room for three more who would like to participate in the workshop by volunteering their work. Let me know.

     
  • Prof McGuire 10:52 am on April 1, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Lesson 11 material now available…

    All the Lesson 11 materials are now posted on the Lessons Blog. There’s a lot to do this week, so take a look and get started right away. Thanks, everyone, for your hard work. Keep it up. We’re getting there.

     
  • Prof McGuire 9:16 am on April 1, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Whole Class Workshop Coming This Week

    This coming week, we have yet another opportunity for a whole class workshop. That means we can take up to four volunteers who would like to get feedback from the rest of the entire class on a draft of their choice. If you’re interested in volunteering your work for discussion, let me know as soon as possible and I’ll add you to the list. First come first serve… Thanks.

     
  • Prof McGuire 2:50 pm on March 25, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Lesson 10 materials now available…

    Hi, all. Hope you’re enjoying the rest of this beautiful weekend. Can’t believe this weather. But, don’t let “spring fever” get the best of you. Enjoy it, get outdoors, but stay focused on the work ahead here as well. :-) Anyway, the material for week 10 has been posted. Check it out over at the Lesson’s Blog. There’s some important stuff there, so it goes without saying, read it all. Thanks.

     
  • Prof McGuire 3:46 pm on March 21, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Just a Point of Clarification

    I’ve mentioned that during this second half of the semester, you will be engaged in a service/activism-learning project of your own. I will be posting an “assignment sheet” on this next week. I just wanted to first give everyone a chance to attend to this week’s peer review.

    If you want to be thinking ahead, though, as I suggest you do. Think about the kind of service you might want to engage in. You could either start with an issue that concerns you and then figure out what organization is working on this and that you might volunteer with, or you could start be finding an organization that interests you and use that as a starting point to learn more about the issue they are working on. (Sometimes the latter is easier.)

    Anyway, be giving it some thought, and we’ll touch on it again next week. Thanks.

     
  • Prof McGuire 8:22 pm on March 14, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    FYI: Grade Book Update

    I’ve updated the grade book. As usual, check it for accuracy and let me know right away and privately if there are any inaccuracies. Thanks. Hope you’re enjoying your break… (I’m still waiting for mine ;-)

     
  • Prof McGuire 9:44 am on March 13, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Give Kelly (and Eric) some feedback

    Hi, everyone. I hope your spring break is off to a good start. Kelly Creed has taken the last spot in our whole class workshop, so please offer her some feedback on her piece over the break (before next week). Also, Eric Wisch has requested whole-class feedback. He wasn’t quite enough to grab that fourth spot fourth spot for the official workshop, but if you can over this break, please give him feedback to. He would very much appreciate your input. Thanks.

     
  • Prof McGuire 10:52 am on March 9, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Give Ben Some Feedback

    In addition to Linda and Iwona, Ben has also volunteered one of his drafts for our whole class workshop. Please be sure to offer him some thoughtful feedback. You can link directly to his piece from the the post about the work shop in this week’s lesson materials.

     
  • Prof McGuire 9:13 pm on March 5, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    We have 2 so far for our Whole Class Workshop

    Linda and Iwona have both volunteered their work for this week’s whole class workshop. Be sure to do a good job for them. There is room for two more people to volunteer their work if they’d like. Act fast, though.

     
  • Prof McGuire 3:06 pm on March 3, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Another Whole Class Workshop

    Next week we will have another whole class workshop, so if you would like one of your drafts discussed by the entire class (a great opportunity for feedback), let me know right away and I’ll add you to the list. Don’t hesitate. Space is limited. Thanks.

     
  • Prof McGuire 9:09 pm on February 27, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Don’t Forget Peer Review this Week

    In my lesson announcement this week, I neglected to mention our next round of peer review (although the instructions are included in the week’s materials). I just didn’t want any misunderstanding. This is a peer review week.

     
  • Prof McGuire 10:28 pm on February 26, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Hunger 101

    As you know, a bunch of us are going to the Greater Chicago Food Depository this Thursday. If you are going, or even if you are not, I’d like you to take a look at a couple of things that might be eye-opening. Check out the following…

    I hope this information helps prepare you a little for this service experience.

    Best,

    Prof McGuire

     
  • Prof McGuire 9:24 am on February 26, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment  

    Lesson 7 materials are now available…

    Lesson 2 materials are now available over on the Lessons Blog for you to get a head start this week. Check it out.

     
  • Prof McGuire 7:13 pm on February 25, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment
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    Sujoud’s Elevator Speech

    I am posting the following “elevator speech” on behalf of our classmate named above. Please give it a listen and offer some comments about the effectiveness (i.e. the persuasive and informative qualities). Does it adequately inform you of the issue? Does it persuade you to care about this matter? Does it communicate clearly a specific action you can take to get involved? Offer your comments below.

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    • Natalie Nalepa 11:56 pm on March 4, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      I have been in a mental hospital before for a week. They were good to us, and I felt safe and secure there. They really helped me. I know the free one in Tinley is closing, not sure where these people will go now. A lot of people don’t have insurance because it is ridiculously expensive. I was paying $165 a month for insurance up until now when I qualified it from work after two years of being there, and I make barely over minimum wage. This country needs to make some changes and eliminate government waste so that they can keep neccesary things, like healthcare.

    • Mayra Pulido 8:29 pm on March 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      You pointed out good points about mental institutions. It was persuasive and felt strong about people needing help and having someone there to help. Some things were hard to hear but overall what i understood was good.

    • Linda Seguin 10:11 am on February 27, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Hello Sujoud,
      I agree with your perception of big city homeless people and visible mental illness. Every mental illness elicites specific physical behaviors that do effect their safety and health. Many do need intermediate nursing care so your activism speech is appreciated. This is going to be a huge growing problem in our communities. i would have loved it if you would have had time to verballize your recommendations on what we could do to help.

  • Prof McGuire 7:12 pm on February 25, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment
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    Shawnette’s Elevator Speech

    I am posting the following “elevator speech” on behalf of our classmate named above. Please give it a listen and offer some comments about the effectiveness (i.e. the persuasive and informative qualities). Does it adequately inform you of the issue? Does it persuade you to care about this matter? Does it communicate clearly a specific action you can take to get involved? Offer your comments below.

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    • Alex Jellema 6:26 pm on March 4, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Your speech sounded just like a commercial on the radio. You get straight to the point and talk about the issue at hand. Your persuade the listener by talking about how the animals are put down, a sad situation. Finally, the listener is told how he or she can get involved in a variety of ways. A good elevator speech, straight to the point.

    • Courtney Watkins 6:19 pm on March 4, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Hello Shawnette,
      You did a nice job on your elevator speech. You got straight to the point by stating the issue at hand with these animals. I like how you encouraged listeners to want to adopt animals. You also gave a descent amount of information on what people can do to get involved in their community.

    • Mayra Pulido 8:34 pm on March 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Your recording was straight to the point. I think you could have been more persuasive. You were very informative about your topic but no persuasive enough. It is sad how many dogs and cats do not have a home. :(

    • Patrycja Gola 7:22 pm on March 1, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Your speech is very to the point, I too talked about animals in shelters. It’s a sad issue that needs to be resolved quick. I am persuaded to do something toward this matter just by someone saying go do it, hopefully many others find this issue as terrible as we do.

  • Prof McGuire 7:12 pm on February 25, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment
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    Sarah’s Elevator Speech

    I am posting the following “elevator speech” on behalf of our classmate named above. Please give it a listen and offer some comments about the effectiveness (i.e. the persuasive and informative qualities). Does it adequately inform you of the issue? Does it persuade you to care about this matter? Does it communicate clearly a specific action you can take to get involved? Offer your comments below.

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    • Sarah Binger 2:16 pm on March 8, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Thank you everyone for their input. I can see now that I should have been more clear on how to help. I really appreciate it!

    • Alex Jellema 7:03 pm on March 4, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      I had no idea that human trafficking was such a big issue in the world today. You talk about many problems with human trafficking, such as statistics from around the world. It’s especially unfortunate to hear about the children that are involved with this. The only thing I missed were ways one can help, though I imagine that might be a little difficult to do. Overall, a good elevator speech.

    • Iwona Ligeska 11:22 am on March 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Hi Sarah,
      Thank you for speaking up for those who have no voice in this world. Human traffiking seems like a forgotten problem but it does exist in the entire world. The statistics are huge. I believe we can make a difference and advocate for less fortunate people. We need to protect children and people around the world. It would be beneficial if you could give us the example what to do to help. I did not hear well from the tape.

      • Iwona Ligeska 11:22 am on March 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

        Thanks.

      • Courtney Watkins 6:25 pm on March 4, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

        Hello Sarah,
        I really enjoyed listening to your elevator speech. You did a very nice job by providing information on the issue of human trafficking. I like how you gave numeric figures to state the facts about the issue. You also provided listeners with information so they can get involved to help.

  • Prof McGuire 7:11 pm on February 25, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment
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    Peter’s Elevator Speech

    I am posting the following “elevator speech” on behalf of our classmate named above. Please give it a listen and offer some comments about the effectiveness (i.e. the persuasive and informative qualities). Does it adequately inform you of the issue? Does it persuade you to care about this matter? Does it communicate clearly a specific action you can take to get involved? Offer your comments below.

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    • Natalie Nalepa 12:00 am on March 5, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      I had two parents the whole time and I’m still pretty messed up lol. But when I think about it, all my friends whose parents split up tended to have a lot of a rougher time keeping up with schoolwork and got deeper into drugs and alcohol as opposed to the ones whose parents did not separate.

    • Courtney Watkins 6:29 pm on March 4, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Hello Peter,
      I really liked how you started your speech off by mentioning something that you know will get everyone attention. I thought it was creative how you brought Whitney Houston into your topic. I do feel you could have provided some sources for listeners to be able to get involved to help out with the situation. Overall, your elevator speech was nice.

    • Patrycja Gola 6:55 pm on March 3, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Deadbeat daddy’s are all over there’s no way to escape it other than don’t have a kid with a moron. I liked your speech, it conveyed an issue that I never really thought about. I have a couple girlfriends who blame the way their lives are because they never had dad’s, but I think that’s just an excuse they use. It’s definitely sad to see kids that always had just one parent, all we can really do is set up community places that can keep those kids busy and out of trouble as well as hang out with them for a day so they can see what a positive person is and hopefully they grow into positive adults.

  • Prof McGuire 7:11 pm on February 25, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment
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    Patrycja’s Elevator Speech

    I am posting the following “elevator speech” on behalf of our classmate named above. Please give it a listen and offer some comments about the effectiveness (i.e. the persuasive and informative qualities). Does it adequately inform you of the issue? Does it persuade you to care about this matter? Does it communicate clearly a specific action you can take to get involved? Offer your comments below.

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    • Natalie Nalepa 11:49 pm on March 4, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      I would never go to a pet store for an animal. They want like $700 for a dog. I used to think that maybe keeping pets inside your house is no good for the animal, that they should be outside, but then my mind completely changed when someone pointed out that they are actually happier because they are free from predators and they do not have to hunt or worry about food and shelter and having water to drink.

    • Maureen Rich 9:46 pm on March 1, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Hi Patrycja, I really liked how you stated that the animals live in jail cells and they need to get out so they can be free to run around. The choice “jail cell” was a good way to portray what these animals feel like. You suggested a good idea to buy from a shelter rather than the pet store so they would have to close down. Are there any local areas you can volunteer to help these animals? I have been to the shelters and it is quite sad seeing all of them in their cells.

  • Prof McGuire 7:10 pm on February 25, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment
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    Natalie’s Elevator Speech?

    I am posting the following “elevator speech” on behalf of maybe Natalie? The presenter did not leave her name, so it is uncertain. Natalie, if this is yours, please claim it. Everyone else, please give it a listen and offer some comments about the effectiveness (i.e. the persuasive and informative qualities). Does it adequately inform you of the issue? Does it persuade you to care about this matter? Does it communicate clearly a specific action you can take to get involved? Offer your comments below.

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    • Natalie Nalepa 11:44 pm on March 4, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Yeah this is mine unfortunately…messed it up pretty bad. Brain froze.

    • Iwona Ligeska 11:10 am on March 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Hi Natalie,
      Very detailed speech with numbers and statistics. You made a lot of research to describe all kinds of bullying and negative behavior. You also encouraged to stop that and report to authorities if possible. It’s not easy in real life but whenever we are in control we need to stop it. Be active and respect each other. Nice speech.

    • Linda Seguin 10:03 am on February 27, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Hello Natalie,
      Your activism issue is bullying and you presented fresh ideas and unusual organizations that are getting involved with this negative behavior, and according to your statistics, out of control.. This behavior must stop. Thanks.

  • Prof McGuire 7:08 pm on February 25, 2012 Permalink | Log in to leave a Comment
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    Mayra’s Elevator Speech

    I am posting the following “elevator speech” on behalf of our classmate named above. Please give it a listen and offer some comments about the effectiveness (i.e. the persuasive and informative qualities). Does it adequately inform you of the issue? Does it persuade you to care about this matter? Does it communicate clearly a specific action you can take to get involved? Offer your comments below.

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    • Iwona Ligeska 9:28 am on March 2, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Hello Mayra,
      I agree with your speech we do take things for granted in our life. Your immigration issue makes me aware that there are people around us who do not have a privilage to go to school or have a decent job because they are ” aliens”. They are in a free country but feel like second category people.Even worse they are treated like that. That’s not fair. People are people. Immigration status should not make them riminals. I agree we need to participate and support the change in immiration law. I liked the way you asked. Still a lot of people are not aware how discriminating current law is.Nicely done.

    • Linda Seguin 9:53 am on February 27, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply

      Hello Mayra,
      I enjoyed hearing the immagration speech in the format that you chose to communicate it in. I wanted to reply verbally to you when you asked a question with a pause. You allowed for the listener to think while you effectively persuaded people to think about the other side of immigration.

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